在雅念念写稿中，一切的写稿手段都不如对写稿的细节主办。在经常的写稿锻真金不怕火中，考生不错字据雅念念写稿评分尺度来臆想我方的写稿水平。

一.拒却无用的单词和词组

1.一些不必要的单词或词组根柢不可为句子带来任何关连的或遑急的信息，透顶不错被删掉。比如：When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得过剩。透顶不错去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.替换没趣的抒发，专门写出复杂的长难句，然而让统共这个词句子显得独特冗长，其实并不会给你的雅念念作文加分。

举例：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”即是一个很典型的繁琐的抒发容貌的例子，不错替换，简化为底下的抒发容貌：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

二.拒却重迭词汇和抒发

1.雅念念写稿评分尺度中有少许：丰富性。许多考生做不到在写稿中使用更丰富的词汇和抒发，也就与高分交臂失之。有的技能诚然词汇莫得重迭，但真理却有重迭。这技能不错做一些简化的责任。

举例底下这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说即是size方面的large，是以in size不错去掉，改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。更粗略的抒发容貌为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm。2.巧合一个词组不错用一个更简便的单词来替换

举例：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents＇ farm。

这里的over and over again就不错改为repeatedly，显得更为粗略：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents＇ farm.

雅念念写稿备考误区

1.背大学四六级词汇就能胜利通过雅念念写稿磨砺极度遍及量的同学别传独一花时辰把大学四六级的单词全部背熟就能干与雅念念写稿磨砺。

其实，大学四六级英语磨砺和雅念念磨砺透顶是2种不同的英文测试系统，两者莫得内在策划，应试法子也大相径庭。

是以同学们花大元气心灵在背诵和牵记大学四六级词汇无疑是阔绰时辰和芳华的一种行径。

针对这一误区，提出考生多阅读海外学术类叙述，累积词汇和习用句型，或者看剑桥雅念念系列真题集4-10，内部的阅读著述包括附录中考官给出的高分范文中的词汇都是雅念念写稿磨砺的遑急词汇。

此外，巧合辰的同学不错干与专科和系统的雅念念考前培训，在较短的时辰内，真挚会教训你们若何正确科学并高效地准备雅念念磨砺。

2.裸考雅念念，以考代替温习

尽管雅念念磨砺并不像高考那样一考定毕生，每年有40多场雅念念磨砺不错干与。然而毫无准备的去干与磨砺自身是一种不闇练和对我方不崇拜，对父母血汗钱的一种亵渎。

因此提出同学们必须历程系统培训或者自学后，有一定的准备和主办了再去干与磨砺，以期胜利通过。

3.反复做剑桥真题系列，就能取得写稿高分

剑桥真题系列是一套独特经典和泰斗的雅念念应试而已，不错这样说，统共准备干与雅念念磨砺的考生基本东说念主手都有一套剑桥的课本。

正确的做法是要仔细阅读剑桥附录中考官所写的范文，议论其段落布局，词汇句型，培养念念路和语感。

雅念念作文写稿例题

大作文题目：Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences， so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

话题分类：媒体类

1.题目领悟：

题目唐突：一些东说念主合计报纸和电视上对于造孽行径的细节刻画有负面的影响，因此这样的信息在媒体中应该被为止。在何种进程上答应这个不雅点？

题型特色：需明确标明对不雅点的作风；同期，题目中有一部分信息是不雅点的原因，‘对造孽行径的细节刻画有负面影响’，对这部分信息不可忽略了回话，不错跟主体段涌现应该被为止放在一皆回话。

本文论文鼓舞：来源引出当下对于媒体的争议，以及题目中的不雅点，标明我方态度。中间段先分析为何此类信息需要被为止，接着用败北的容貌承认一些媒体上此类信息有一定自制，但过于细节的是需要为止的。收尾总论断点，重申不雅点。

难点：这说念题容易让考生纠结为止的‘进程’问题，提出同学们针对题目给出的要道信息‘detailed description’进行回话，即咱们的不雅点是‘为止媒体上对于造孽细节的刻画’，而不是透顶不合造孽信息进行报说念。

2.写做念路：

来源段：当下媒体解放度较高，对造孽的报说念也越来越丰富。有东说念主牵记此类细节的报说念会产生不良效果，应该被为止。个东说念主不雅点默示答应。

主体第一段：之是以应该为止这一类细节刻画，有几大原因。受到最大影响的瑕瑜法的受害者，报说念过于细节，会加剧他们的身心创伤，致使侵扰心事。而对粗鄙民众来说也有害，细节刻画含有过于血腥暴力的施行，不仅引起不适，也让东说念主担忧对年青东说念主的影响。三是对于一些潜在的造孽份子，这些细节报说念可能会给他们提供信息支援，刺激和怂恿了造孽行径。

主体第二段：天然，规则的报说念有正向作用，也有东说念主合计在报纸和电视上对造孽进行一定进程的报说念大略让民众增强安全意志，了解造孽份子的行径形式，改善保护顺序，幸免成为受害者。但报说念的施行应当进行充分审查，进行要道的证实即可，细节的报说念是莫得必要的。

收尾段：总的来说，基于对公共和造孽率的影响，造孽的细节刻画是需要受到审查和为止的， 诚然报纸和电视有协助民众进步疑望意志的职守。

参考范文

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner， which certainly arouses a great deal of concern. In light of this， some people believe there should be restrictions on such information. From my perspective， I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated. The group most affected by the news media＇s coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims. This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive， voyeuristic， and uncaring can largely violate victims’ privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering. Not only that，the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details. In fact， these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people. Besides，it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes， since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and，in some cases，even healing. Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime. Indeed，the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs，such as new patterns of fraud，ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime. However，the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions，so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion， although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases， I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details世博体育app下载， in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.

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